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Extereme sports are dangerous and should be banned

Extereme sports are dangerous and should be banned D68Pm

The author denies the idea that extreme sports can put athletes at too much risk. The fact is having an accident while doing sports is unavoidable; however, most risks decrease by setting understandable and safe procedures and rules. Moreover, Sports have been becoming more secured due to advancing the security and technology of their equipment. Although establishing reliable and safe guidance for sports is essential, stopping people from performing them is mistaken and difficult. If we are aware of extreme sports' consequences, the right to exercise should remain ours. In addition, most dangerous sports are executed somewhere remote that has no law enforcement.

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idea
 that extreme You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 can put athletes at too much This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
. The fact is having an accident while doing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 is unavoidable; however
, most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardsdangers
risks
 decrease by setting understandable and safe procedures and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
. Moreover
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
Sports
 have been becoming more secured due to advancing the security and technology of their equipment.

Although establishing reliable and safe guidance for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 is essential, stopping This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 from performing them is mistaken
 and difficult. If we are aware of extreme sports' consequences, the right to exercise should remain ours. In addition
, most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
are executed
 somewhere remote that has no law enforcement. 