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Advertisements can have a negative impact on children

Advertisements can have a negative impact on children LGKd1

Advertisement has a drastic negative influence on younger generation. Because the viewers solely believe what’s being advertised without thinking how far it is true. As a consequence they end up buying the product pestering the parents. Also parents assume it’s a social status and encourage children by reinforcing their behavior by buying the unnecessary products. In particular teenagers get carried away by the cosmetic industry advertisements, which might lead them to a serious health hazards in the long run. The children have to be taught to be aware and not get influenced by advertisement. In other words “Think before you buy”.

Advertisement has a drastic This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 influence on younger generation. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 the viewers solely
 believe what’s being advertised
 without thinking how far it is true. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 a consequence they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up buying the product pestering the parents. Also
 parents assume it’s a social status and encourage children by reinforcing their behavior by buying the unnecessary products. In particular
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 carried away by the cosmetic industry advertisements, which might lead them to a serious health hazards in the long run. The children This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
be taught
 to be aware and not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 influenced by advertisement. In other words
 “This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
Think
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
”. 