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4. The internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world.

4. The internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world. N8Gdj
Internet plays significant role in providing a great resource of knowledge for general public. Because surfing internet will give ample information on various topics across nations. Thus a person who uses internet to gain knowledge become smarter and intelligent and has lot more chances to keep themselves updated on current situation. In particular the people who read reliable sources such as Wikipedia, google scholar and SAGE publishing has not only information but has credible and accurate message. Through internet one can have access to information, educational resource and increased opportunity for learning. In other words it opens the doorways to wealth of knowledge.
Internet plays significant role in providing a great resource of knowledge for
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general public
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Because
surfing internet will give ample information on various topics across nations.
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Thus
a person who
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uses
internet to gain knowledge become smarter and intelligent and has lot more chances to
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keep
themselves updated on
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current
situation.
In particular
the
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people
who read reliable sources such as Wikipedia,
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google scholar
and SAGE publishing has not
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only
information
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has credible and accurate message. Through internet one can have access to information, educational resource and increased opportunity for learning.
In other words
it opens the doorways to wealth of knowledge.

IELTS essay 4. The internet is a great course of information and has opened up opportunities for people to learn all over the world.

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103 words
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