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Advertisement are good or bad for society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In this modern era, advertisements plays a significant role in pupil's life. A chunk of community opine that this as a favourable trend whilst, other masses reckon it ad a redundant switch. The forth coming paragraphs shall articulate the alternate convictions as well as my own stand point. To commence with, there are multifarious benefits of advertisement. Firstly, advertisements are a great source for mankinds to update withmarket movements because through bulletin human beings are aware of latest products which are available in market as well as notice board are get to know about different kinds of employment vaccancies which are assist people for finding jobs. For instance, a survey was conducted by government of Australia in 2017 claimed that majority of pupils revealed that bulletin are play crucial role to aware humans about current market trends. Moreover, through advertisements dwellers get discount and beneficial offers from where they get money profit. On the contrary side, bulletin are also some negative movements. Firstly, there are many chances of cheating through items or other information as some times marketers influence the customers by giving a false details because of this pupils are easily influenced by their trap. For example, recently in canada the case of cheating was experienced by many citizens with providing a incorrect information nad fall into their trap. Furthermore, individuals are addictive through unnecessary shopping by advertisements. In conclusion, although there is no denying that there are lot of good points of bulletin but, there are also some bad points of advertisement. I personally suggest that masses are not blindly trust on such board.
In this modern era,
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advertisements
plays a significant role in pupil's life. A chunk of community opine that this as a
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favourable
trend whilst, other masses reckon it ad a redundant switch. The forth coming paragraphs shall articulate the alternate convictions
as well
as my
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own
stand point. To commence with, there are multifarious benefits of
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advertisement
.
Firstly
,
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advertisements
are a great source for
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mankinds
to update
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withmarket
movements
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because
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through
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bulletin
human beings are aware of
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latest
products which are available in market
as well
as notice board are
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get
to know about
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different
kinds of employment
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vaccancies
which are assist
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people
for finding jobs.
For instance
, a survey
was conducted
by
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government
of Australia in 2017 claimed that majority of pupils revealed that
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bulletin
are play crucial role to aware humans about
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current
market trends.
Moreover
,
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through
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advertisements
dwellers
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get
discount and beneficial offers from where they
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get
money profit.
On the contrary
side,
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bulletin
are
also
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some
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negative
movements.
Firstly
, there are
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many
chances of cheating
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through
items or other information as
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some
times marketers influence the customers by giving a false
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details
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because
of
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pupils are
easily
influenced by their trap.
For example
, recently in
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canada
the case of cheating
was experienced
by
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many
citizens with providing
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a
incorrect information
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nad
fall into their trap.
Furthermore
, individuals are addictive
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through
unnecessary shopping by
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advertisements
.
In conclusion
, although there is no denying that there are lot of
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good
points of
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bulletin
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but
, there are
also
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some
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bad
points of
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advertisement
. I
personally
suggest that masses are not
blindly
trust on such board.
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IELTS essay Advertisement are good or bad for society.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
266 words
5.5
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