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advantages of online shopping

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Nowadays, people are more inclined to prefer online shopping. There are several advantages covering up the disadvantages of the Internet shopping. Generally speaking, despite having some disadvantages like security issues, shopping online makes one's life easier. Two main things that make the Internet market to outperform conventional markets are the cost and the accesibility. Shopping through the Internet is cost effective for both the customer and the producer. It decreases the cost of finding and comparing a good making customer to have more money for shopping. For example, a person have to pay for transportation in order to try a new glasses while it is not the case for online shopping. Besides, traditional sellers have to rent a place that is near to the crowded streets which makes seller to pay more for the place where online store owners can buy warehouses in the rural areas. Physical store owners also have to hire more workers as their job requires face-to-face marketing. All in all, online shopping is more cost effective which leads decreased prices and increased budgets. In addition to lower cost of online shopping, finding out products that are wanted to buy is easier when buying something from the Internet. To examplify, it is hard to find a book by visiting bookstores one by one. However, one can simply find this book by using search box of an online bookseller. Developments in search engine technologies made online searching faster and easier. A standart website search tool may look up for the given book from thousands of books while it may take months with old-fashioned ways.
Nowadays,
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people
are more inclined to prefer
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online
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shopping
. There are several advantages covering up the disadvantages of the Internet shopping.

Generally
speaking, despite having
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some
disadvantages like security issues,
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shopping
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online
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makes
one's life easier. Two main things that
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make
the Internet market to outperform conventional markets are the
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cost
and the
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accesibility
.

Shopping through the Internet is
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cost
effective for both the customer and the producer. It decreases the
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cost
of finding and comparing a
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good
making customer to have more money for
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shopping
.
For example
, a person
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have to
pay for transportation in order to try a new
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glasses
while it is not the case for
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online
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shopping
.
Besides
, traditional sellers
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have to
rent a place
that is
near to the crowded streets which
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makes
seller to pay more for the place where
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online
store owners can
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buy
warehouses in the rural areas. Physical store owners
also
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have to
hire more workers as their job requires face-to-face marketing. All in all,
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online
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shopping
is more
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cost
effective which leads decreased prices and increased budgets.

In addition
to lower
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cost
of
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online
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shopping
, finding out products that
are wanted
to
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buy
is easier when buying something from the Internet. To
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examplify
, it is
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hard
to find a
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book
by visiting bookstores one by one.
However
, one can
simply
find this
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book
by using search box of an
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online
bookseller. Developments in search engine technologies made
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online
searching faster and easier. A
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standart
website search tool may look up for the
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given
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book
from thousands of
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books
while it may take months with
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old
-fashioned ways.
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IELTS essay advantages of online shopping

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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