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Advantages of living in a nuclear family

Advantages of living in a nuclear family LwNMn

There are several benefits of living in a nuclear family. First and foremost, the family members have more privacy. There are more space in a house for a nuclear family. They can free to go about making their own choices and hiding their secret. They also decorate the private space followed their idea. For example, children are able to have a room which is decorated with their toys, photos, favourite color, etc. In addition, parents in a nuclear family can educate their children easily. Nowadays, the way to educate is totally changed, so the old way is not suitable for kids. However, some adults still teach their children the old way and even new way, which makes them confuse. Therefore, living in a nuclear house will not have any discussion about the system education. In conclusion, living in a nuclear family has more positives.

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