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Advantages of disadvantages getting married

Advantages of disadvantages getting married BMjad
Disadvantages of Getting Married You limit your level of freedom No other partners allowed You might get trapped in an unhappy marriage Dependence on your partner Bad for one party in case of divorce Divorce may lead to financial obligations Attraction may suffer significantly over time Divorce rates are quite high Many people are quite naive regarding the concept of marriage Divorce laws often favor women You introduce the state into your life You have to get along with the family of your spouse Individuality may suffer Daily routine may eat you up The effort is often not worth the price Marriage is not a guarantee that your partner stays with you Romantic vs. rational decisions Marriage is not for everyone Wedding can be quite expensive Feelings change over time Construct of the past
Disadvantages of Getting Married

You limit your level of freedom

No other partners
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allowed


You might
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get
trapped in an unhappy marriage

Dependence on your partner

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Bad
for one party in case of
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divorce Divorce
may lead to financial obligations

Attraction may suffer
significantly
over time

Divorce rates are quite high

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Many
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people
are quite naive regarding the concept of marriage

Divorce laws
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often
favor women

You introduce the state into your life

You
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have to
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get
along with the family of your spouse

Individuality may suffer

Daily routine may eat you up

The effort is
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often
not worth the price

Marriage is not a guarantee that your partner stays with you

Romantic vs. rational decisions

Marriage is not for everyone

The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "weds", "wed", "wedded".
Wedding
can be quite expensive

Feelings
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change
over time

Construct of the past
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IELTS essay Advantages of disadvantages getting married

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
133 words
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