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advantages of digital technology

advantages of digital technology 73VMb

It goes without saying that since the invention of technology, people’s lives have been made easier. For instance, with the click of a button, you can have access to a wide variety of sources of information. What is more, there is no longer a need for us to move from your house to purchase any item of clothing or food. Technological devices have allowed the improvement of education in most parts of the world. Students no longer need to go through the pages of books to find the information they need to finish their assignments, surfing on the internet they can find different sources to back up their argumentation. Yet, they need to be careful and double check that the site is reliable. For adults who do not have enough time to do shopping, online stores allow them to acquire any item and have access to any service in a straightforward way, all they have to do is to select what they need and provide information where the delivery can arrive to your location. To put it all together, technology has been a great asset for the improvement of education for children and a great aid for people who cannot go shopping by themselves. Yet, we all need to be careful who we give our personal information to and double check whether the information is authentic.

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allowed
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enough
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do shopping
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allow
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people
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need
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information
 to and double This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
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information
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