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Advantages and disadvantages which were brought up by coronavirus.

Advantages and disadvantages which were brought up by coronavirus. Wyq3N
On a global basis, we are witnessing a bunch of newspapers and electronic messages via social media, which is bringing adverse information concerning, the infected, or even died part of the population, as a matter of perilous virus, named as COVID-19. This virus had already affected thousands of people, in almost every part of our globe, unfortunately with fatal results. However, even though it has provoked many disadvantages, on the other hand, the coronavirus has caused to keep some essential regulations throughout society and has brought many other pluses to the ecology. This essay will be in charge of showing possible pros and cons which were stated after this worldwide disease came out. First and foremost, our nature has and being rehabilitated, since civilians were put into the quarantine to avoid getting infected by. This has led to the reduction of the total disposal in the entire world, as well as, fewer people are now less engaged in visiting green zones where they were often used to leave a considerable density of rubbish. Not to forget that the transportation system was also banned, as another part of the disinfection which has resulted in altering the type of vehicle. A vivid example, could be bicycles which offers a big deal of health normalization and probably one of the answers to struggle with obesity in humans. Negatively, on the contrary side, innocent people are suffering from this disaster, precisely, they are staying apart from their relatives, they are no longer involved in contact with their familiars. In brief words, not visiting parents and friends became an act of their love for them. Furthermore, many companies have entered bankruptcy, because fewer individuals are now available outside. The bottom line is that our current phenomenon does actually have its meaning: this is the warning from above. I am convinced to believe that we are now getting a fair response to our actions that we previously did to the Earth. Visibly, it's far more convenient to the Earth without our presence than with.
On a global basis, we are witnessing a bunch of newspapers and electronic messages via social media, which is bringing adverse information concerning, the infected, or even
died
part of the population, as a matter of perilous virus, named as COVID-19. This virus had already
affected
thousands of
people
, in almost every part of our globe, unfortunately with fatal results.
However
,
even though
it has provoked
many
disadvantages,
on the other hand
, the coronavirus has caused to
keep
some
essential regulations throughout society and has brought
many
other pluses to the ecology. This essay will be in charge of showing possible pros and cons which
were stated
after this worldwide disease came out.

First
and foremost, our nature has and
being rehabilitated
, since civilians
were put
into the quarantine to avoid getting infected by. This has led to the reduction of the total disposal in the entire world,
as well
as, fewer
people
are
now
less engaged in visiting green zones where they were
often
used
to
leave
a considerable density of rubbish. Not to forget that the transportation system was
also
banned, as another part of the disinfection which has resulted in altering the type of vehicle. A vivid example, could be bicycles which offers a
big
deal of health normalization and
probably
one of the answers to struggle with obesity in humans.

Negatively
,
on the contrary
side, innocent
people
are suffering from this disaster,
precisely
, they are staying apart from their relatives, they are no longer involved in contact with their familiars.
In brief
words, not visiting parents and friends became an act of their
love
for them.
Furthermore
,
many
companies
have entered bankruptcy,
because
fewer individuals are
now
available outside.

The bottom line is that our
current
phenomenon does actually have its meaning: this is the warning from above. I
am convinced
to believe that we are
now
getting a
fair
response to our actions that we previously did to the Earth.
Visibly
, it's far more convenient to the Earth without our presence than with.
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IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantages which were brought up by coronavirus.

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4 paragraphs
338 words
6.0
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