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Advantages and disadvantages: renting a house rather than buying a house

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When it comes to renting a home, there are both of some advantages and disadvantages than buying a home. One of the advantages is that it would be easier to move to other areas when you need. On the contrary, people should always think about living with other residences within the building. To begin with, it might be convenient for workers who have a plan to be transferred to a different place if you are renting a house. All they have to do is just packing for possessions. Then, they will be able to start their new lives in a another flat. Those do not need to treat with a problem related to the house where you stay. Additionally, residences will have easy access to communicate with each other. There might be some communities with them to make their lifestyles more enjoyable and they can help one another if they need any help. On the other hand, it can be said that people who live in the apartment should consider others all the time and even share some equipment or areas. For example, if there is a family make some noise loudly above your room or break the rule of the housing, a person who just stared living will not feel comfortable anymore and have to cope with the stressful situation. In conclusion, there are some drawbacks as well as benefits when you rent a home, The merit is that it would be easier to move to other areas when you need. However, the demerit is that people should always think about living with other residences within the building.
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residences within the building.

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with, it might be convenient for workers who have a plan to
be transferred
to a
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different
place if you are renting a
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house
. All they
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have to
do is
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packing for possessions. Then, they will be able to
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start
their new
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lives
in
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another flat. Those do not
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need
to treat with a problem related to the
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house
where you stay.
Additionally
, residences will have easy access to communicate with each
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other
. There might be
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some
communities with them to
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make
their lifestyles more
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enjoyable and
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one another if they
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people
who
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live
in the apartment should consider others all the time and even share
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some
equipment or areas.
For example
, if there is a family
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make
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some
noise
loudly
above your room or break the
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rule
of the housing, a person who
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just
stared living will not feel comfortable anymore and
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have to
cope with the stressful situation.

In conclusion
, there are
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some
drawbacks
as well
as benefits when you rent a home, The merit is that it would be easier to
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move
to
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other
areas when you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
.
However
, the demerit is that
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people
should always
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think
about living with
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other
residences within the building.
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IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantages: renting a house rather than buying a house

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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