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Advantages and disadvantages of studing at university

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Several people want to enter university to get a high grade and experience theirs major. However, they have advantages on the hand and disadvantages on the flip side of studying at university. In this essay, I want to write about this. After graduating from university, the person will be able to find a good job in their specialty and earn a lot of money. Besides people can study his specialty perfectly while studying at university. This is a great help for people to be able to direct their future careers correctly. Finally, a person can further enhance their thinking by studying at university. Under other conditions of studying at university has several disadvantages, such as expensive tuition fees. Tuition fees are expensive, some students have problems with money and they are also forced to work. This causes them to get tired and can't their homework. Also, if people graduate from a university in our country their certificate will pass only in our hometown. It doesn't pass to other countries. Studying at university has plenty of advantages and disadvantages, but in my opinion, people should always study. Because knowledge never harms us. My dream also enters to university and work in a good place in the future.
Several
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people
want to enter
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university
to
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get
a high grade and experience theirs major.
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, they have advantages on the hand and disadvantages on the flip side of
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studying
at
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university
. In this essay, I want to write about this.

After graduating from
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university
, the person will be able to find a
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good
job in their specialty and earn
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a lot of
money.
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Besides
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people
can study his specialty
perfectly
while
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studying
at
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university
. This is a great
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help
for
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people
to be able to direct their future careers
correctly
.
Finally
, a person can
further
enhance their thinking by
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studying
at university.

Under other conditions of
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studying
at
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university
has several disadvantages, such as expensive tuition fees. Tuition fees are expensive,
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some
students have problems with
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money and
they are
also
forced to work. This causes them to
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get
tired and can't their homework.
Also
, if
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people
graduate from a
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university
in our country their certificate will pass
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only
in our hometown. It doesn't pass to other countries.

Studying at
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university
has
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plenty
of advantages and disadvantages,
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but
in my opinion,
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people
should always study.
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Because
knowledge never harms us. My dream
also
enters to
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university
and work in a
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good
place in the future.
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IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantages of studing at university

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
206 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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