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advantages and disadvantages of playing video games

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In these present-day, humans, especially children are allowed to acquaint themselves with divergent electronic devices very soon. The problem is, most of them are not interesting in many useful learning website but playing video games instead. In this essay, I will discuss about the benefits and detriment of this form of entertainment. The most tremendous advantage that every video game offers is pleasure. Amusing sound, terrific graphics, etc. all are able to help relieve pressure, fatigue after working for a long day. Not only do video games make time go faster, but they also can expose or forge hidden skills. For instance, playing high-speed games promote you to be rapid response. Besides, with puzzled games, you can improve your deduction or quick, accurate calculation.

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