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What are advantages of working from home?

What are advantages of working from home? ebJyW
Covid19 is more and more complicated and dangerous. In one day, in Vietnam has more than 12. 000 across the country. So those Prime Minister have enacted Directive No. 16, it means citizens have stay at home, stay safe. Absolutely, all companies require our stuff to work online. I'm of the opinion that working from home has multiple benefits. For one thing, remote working allows us to create a comfortable workspace at home, which leads to increased productivity. Another advantages of working remotely is that we completely avoid covid 19. We can save time, avoid traffic stress. Besides, we don't have to dressed politely as in company.
Covid19
is more and more complicated and
dangerous
. In one day, in Vietnam has more than 12. 000 across the country.
So
those Prime Minister have enacted Directive No. 16, it means citizens have stay at home, stay safe.
Absolutely
, all
companies
require our stuff to work online. I'm of the opinion that working from home has multiple benefits. For one thing, remote working
allows
us to create a comfortable workspace at home, which leads to increased productivity. Another advantages of working
remotely
is that we completely avoid
covid 19
. We can save time, avoid traffic
stress
.
Besides
, we don't
have to
dressed
politely
as in
company
.
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IELTS essay What are advantages of working from home?

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