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What are advantages of working from home?

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Covid19 is more and more complicated and dangerous. In one day, in Vietnam has more than 12. 000 across the country. So those Prime Minister have enacted Directive No. 16, it means citizens have stay at home, stay safe. Absolutely, all companies require our stuff to work online. I'm of the opinion that working from home has multiple benefits. For one thing, remote working allows us to create a comfortable workspace at home, which leads to increased productivity. Another advantages of working remotely is that we completely avoid covid 19. We can save time, avoid traffic stress. Besides, we don't have to dressed politely as in company.

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IELTS essay What are advantages of working from home?

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

107 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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