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Describe an animal that you like

Describe an animal that you like jdryM
One of mu favourite animals that I would like to talk about it is elephant, they are the second largest mammals after the blue whales. In Fact, elephants are vegetation and eating trees barks and roots and their weights are different between 3000 to 6000, depending which area that they are living and also their consuming. However the research shows that the elephants are very emotion as a human and even cry when they lose baby calves or hurt. At the end I found them very strong and intelligent and there has been evidence that show the elephants have eye contact with humans. There are many factors and benefits they have us, also during the centuries, people were using the elephant as transportation and hobby.
One of mu
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favourite
animals that I would like to talk about it is
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elephant
, they are the second largest mammals after the blue whales. In Fact,
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elephants
are vegetation and eating trees barks and roots and their weights are
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different
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 3000 and 6000".
between 3000 to 6000
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which area that they are living and
also
their consuming.
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the research
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are
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emotion as a human and even cry when they lose baby calves or hurt. At the
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end
I found them
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very
strong and intelligent and there has been evidence that
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show
the
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elephants
have eye contact with humans. There are
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many
factors and benefits they have us,
also
during the centuries,
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people
were using the
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as transportation and hobby.
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IELTS essay Describe an animal that you like

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  American English
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125 words
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