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Describe an animal that you like

Describe an animal that you like jdryM

One of mu favourite animals that I would like to talk about it is elephant, they are the second largest mammals after the blue whales. In Fact, elephants are vegetation and eating trees barks and roots and their weights are different between 3000 to 6000, depending which area that they are living and also their consuming. However the research shows that the elephants are very emotion as a human and even cry when they lose baby calves or hurt. At the end I found them very strong and intelligent and there has been evidence that show the elephants have eye contact with humans. There are many factors and benefits they have us, also during the centuries, people were using the elephant as transportation and hobby.

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