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Companies’ product impact human

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n recent times. Whether products’ prospering is often argued and opinions vary as to whether it is beneficial or harmful for humankind. There are some who believe that products’ flourish are harmful, whilst others disagree and argue they are vital. I would absolutely agree that they are harmful. The drawback of industrial products should be outweighed by the harmful effects. Most of the products from the companies were made from the industry. Consequently, the flourish of industry would bring us climate change. Global warming is mainly caused by industry; this crisis should not be overlooked. Everybody should take part in this. For instance, governments should set up an organization or measure where they could control these problems. As such, governments should seek to strike an appropriate balance by ensuring that companies’ products will not adversely affect citizens. A wide range of industries would bring us numerous pollution. It is my opinion that these negative long term effects greatly outweigh the short term benefits that companies can bring to our everyday lives. Enhancing, the companies and government should be mature enough to control this situation. To recapitulate, everybody in this world, not just the companies should be concerned about this.
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recent times. Whether
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prospering is
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argued and opinions vary
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as to whether
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harmful
for humankind.

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some
who believe that
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products’
flourish are
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harmful
, whilst others disagree and argue they are vital. I would
absolutely
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agree
that they are
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harmful
. The drawback of industrial
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products
should
be outweighed
by the
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harmful
effects. Most of the
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products
from the
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companies
were made
from the
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industry
.
Consequently
, the flourish of
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industry
would bring us climate
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change
. Global warming is
mainly
caused by
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industry
; this crisis should not
be overlooked
. Everybody should
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take part
in this.
For instance
,
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governments
should set up an organization or measure where they could control these problems. As such,
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governments
should seek to strike an appropriate balance by ensuring that
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companies’
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products
will not
adversely
affect citizens. A wide range of
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industries
would bring us numerous pollution.

It is my opinion that these
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negative
long term effects
greatly
outweigh the short term benefits that
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companies
can bring to our everyday
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lives
. Enhancing, the
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companies
and
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government
should be mature
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enough
to control this situation. To recapitulate, everybody in this world, not
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just
the
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companies
should
be concerned
about this.
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IELTS essay Companies’ product impact human

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