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Should computer skills be considered as a part of the most important subjects besides reading, writing, maths?

Should computer skills be considered as a part of the most important subjects besides reading, writing, maths? jRD7L

There are several reasons of workplace, why computer should be included in crucial subjects of education. Firstly, since more and more schools require having a good grasp of computer skills, their students get to gain and secure a decent job. In fact, according to a survey conducted by Christ University, approximately 95% of recruiters seeks applicants who are highly versed in computer, which leads to a better qualified employment.

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IELTS essay Should computer skills be considered as a part of the most important subjects besides reading, writing, maths?

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