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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. 2BN6
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For
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mony
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people
around the world, the preferred method of
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transportakion
is
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high-speed
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rail
.
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Communters
travelling to and from
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work
rely on the safety and
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efficiencyo
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whill
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Eourists
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appreciake
the convenience and
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novelky
that
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trains
provide. Others
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bekeve
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thak
highways, busses and regular
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trains
should be
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improved
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before
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newo
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hioh-speed
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knes
ore
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added
. Safety is
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cheif
among concerns for those who travel to
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work
or school on a
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reguor
basis. If One drives a
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cas
, they
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have to
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concentrake
on the rood not
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onky
to avoid accidents
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but
also
to
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prevent
other
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arivers
From
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causinga
problem on the road. High- speed
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rail
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allows
the
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comunter
to
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leave
the driving to the professional
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conkrolling
the
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train
,
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allowiing
them to
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get
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some
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work
done while getting to
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work
safely
.
In addition
,
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people
tend to
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move
further
and
further
away from city
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centres
, where land and
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houses
are more affordable.
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High-speed
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rail
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allows
these commuters to travel
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greaker
distances in a shorter
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ammount
of time. There is a flow -on effect here,
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because
if we can
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reduce
the number of cars on the road, we can
also
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cut
down on
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Eraffic
jams and road delays.
On the other hand
,
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high-speed
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trains
are expensive, and
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some
believe this money could be
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spend
on repairing motorways which are
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used
by cars, busses and motorcycles.
Another possibility
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woua
be to
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use
this money
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Eo
build more regular
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communter
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trains
and busses to service the ever-expanding urban populations.
Moreover
,
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boaks
and ferries could benefit from a budget which focuses more on existing forms of transport.
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pay
should
be spent
on the type of
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Eransport
which will have the most benefit to all citizens.
In addition
, we need to take into account how much the environment is In the
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end
, public transport is an issue which affects us all. The taxes which we
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domaged
by fossil fuels and pollution.
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Eherefore
, I believe in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
forward, we need to embrace the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
high-speed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rail
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so
that future generations can continue to
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kve
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safeky
and
efficiently
.
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IELTS essay In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

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