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advantage and disadvantages of the public transport. Various aspects of commuting.

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In the concurrent world, it is unfortunately true that public transport play a vital role in the world. Because it is beneficial for us for the longest journey and it is cheapest rather then private vehicles. Some people concur that public transport is wastage of time for the short journey. . however, I quibble from them and profound that public transportation is beneficial for longest journeys through this way we get a chance to meet other people. Adequate evidences are obtaineable to substantiate the concept of longest journeys make us to feel comfortable and be are able to get socializing to other. Top notch concrete reason public transportation cheaper than private vehicles because we have no worries about the parking space or break down. Another rationable which hauls me to patron is many individuals can travel togather. They can get a chance to talking with others. The rearmost coherent factor to be considered which can not be neglected is some times people meet their peers and relatives. To hold my notions, I would quote an instance of of how their life is going on and know about their well-being. Which is Prima facie testimony thus, it is clear that, public transport has certainly undeniable merits. What is half full for some, may appear half empty to others. So the public in general tend to distinguish that public transport is wastage of time because some routes are not quite popular. so buses go there few times. people do wait for the buses for longer hours. Which has multifarious reasons. To commence with some people seem that they can't get seats but they pay same amount of money. Sometimes they stands up for minutes and hours. That makes them feel uncomfortable withdal they uphold that public transport is not best for short distances. To illustrate totally is wastage of time to wait for because public transport run on their own ttime. In recapitulation, I reiterate that there are innumerable strong factors supporting public transport is beneficial. However, it's contrary can be overlooked or controlled. Consequently, I firmly agree to the given statement.
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public
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play a vital role in the world.
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Because
it is beneficial for us for the longest
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journey
and it is cheapest
rather
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then
private vehicles.
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Some
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people
concur that
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public
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transport
is wastage of
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time
for the short
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journey
.
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however
, I quibble from them and profound that
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public
transportation is beneficial for longest
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journeys
through this way we
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get
a chance to
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meet
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other
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people
. Adequate evidences are
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obtaineable
to substantiate the concept of
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longest
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journeys
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make
us to feel comfortable and be are able to
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get
socializing to
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other
.
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Top notch
concrete reason
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public
transportation cheaper than private vehicles
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because
we have no worries about the parking space or break down. Another
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rationable
which hauls me to patron is
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many
individuals can travel
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togather
. They can
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get
a chance to talking with others. The rearmost coherent factor to
be considered
which can not
be neglected
is
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some
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times
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people
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meet
their peers and relatives. To hold my notions, I would quote an instance
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of of
how their life is going on and know about their well-being. Which is
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Prima
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facie
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, it is
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clear
that,
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has
certainly
undeniable merits. What is half full for
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some
, may appear half empty to others.
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the
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public
in general
tend to distinguish that
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public
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is wastage of
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time
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because
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some
routes are not quite popular.
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so
buses go there few
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times
.
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people
do wait for the buses for longer hours. Which has multifarious reasons. To commence with
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seem that they can't
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get
seats
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but
they pay same amount of money.
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makes
them feel uncomfortable
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withdal
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is not best for short distances. To illustrate
totally
is wastage of
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time
to wait for
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run on their
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own
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ttime
. In recapitulation, I reiterate that there are innumerable strong factors supporting
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is beneficial.
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IELTS essay advantage and disadvantages of the public transport. Various aspects of commuting.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
350 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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