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It is impossible for us to imagine a world without television. Because television has become part of us. Watching television is the most popular way to spend free time for millions of people. It is relaxing, it is entertaining, but, on the other hand, it is addictive. Watching TV really benefits or harms us. First of all, television helps the people to get updated on daily happenings in the world. So, television isbpart of us. One of the biggest family entertainments is Television. Furthermore, the educational programs in television are innumerable. Lots of programs are available on science and Technology. Current news is made available with audio and visuals through television. Many learning programs and social programs are also telecasted in many chanels. This will be a great way to induce motivate people to know and excel in their field of expertise. On the other hand, television makes people addicted. Often, children start to become addicts to Television. This ultimately spoils their studies. Though educational programs are telecasted in Television, kids and children tend to watch only cartoon programs and time comsuming programs. What is more, watching Television for long hours might disturb a person's sleep cycle, routine and severely affect one's health too. Just as there is a good and a bad side to everything, so does television. It will be our best side if we know how to use the TV properly and it will also save us time. Through this we can increase our knowledge. Maintaining balance is in our hands.
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Because
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has become part of us. Watching
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television
is the most popular way to spend free time for millions of
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people
. It is relaxing, it is entertaining,
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,
on the other hand
, it is addictive. Watching TV
really
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First of all
,
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television
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helps
the
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people
to
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get
updated on daily happenings in the world.
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So
,
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television
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isbpart
of us. One of the biggest family entertainments is
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Television
.
Furthermore
, the educational
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programs
in
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television
are innumerable. Lots of
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programs
are available on science and Technology.
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Current
news
is made
available with audio and visuals through
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television
.
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Many
learning
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programs
and social
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programs
are
also
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telecasted
in
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many
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chanels
. This will be a great way to induce motivate
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people
to know and excel in their field of expertise.

On the other hand
,
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television
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makes
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people
addicted.
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Often
, children
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start
to become addicts to
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Television
. This
ultimately
spoils their studies. Though educational
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programs
are
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telecasted
in
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Television
, kids and children tend to
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watch
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only
cartoon
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programs
and time
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comsuming
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programs
.
What is more
, watching
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Television
for long hours might disturb a person's sleep cycle, routine and
severely
affect one's health too.

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Just
as there is a
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good
and a
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bad
side to everything,
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so
does
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television
. It will be our best side if we know how to
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use
the TV
properly
and it will
also
save us time. Through this we can increase our knowledge. Maintaining balance is in our hands.
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IELTS essay advantage and disadvantages

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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