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annual spending by a particular school in UK at 1981, 1991 and 2001

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Pie Chats here shows the total annual spending by a particular school in UK spanning over three decade starting from 1981. While comparing things like Teacher's Salaries, Furniture and Equipments, Resources, Salaries of Other Workers, and the insurance at an interval of 10 year. It is seen that Teacher's Salary have first been increased but subsequently decreased over next decade. Similar trend was seen in Resources. In Contrast, Spending on Furniture and Equipments have decreased and then increased sharply over next coming decade. It was also observed that Salaries of other workers were reducing at somewhat steady pace. Furthermore, there is exponential growth is seen on expenditure on insurance over the span of whole observation.
Pie Chats here
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the total annual spending by a particular school in UK spanning
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from 1981. While comparing things like Teacher's
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Salaries
, Furniture and Equipments, Resources,
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Salaries
of

Other Workers, and the insurance at an interval of 10 year.

It is
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that Teacher's
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Salary
have
first
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but
subsequently
decreased
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next
decade.

Similar trend was
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seen
in Resources.
In Contrast
, Spending on Furniture and Equipments have decreased
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then
increased
sharply
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over
next
coming decade.

It was
also
observed that
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Salaries
of other workers were reducing at somewhat steady pace.
Furthermore
, there is

exponential growth is
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on expenditure on insurance
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the span of whole observation.

IELTS essay annual spending by a particular school in UK at 1981, 1991 and 2001

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
115 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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