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annual spending by a particular school in UK at 1981, 1991 and 2001

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Pie Chats here shows the total annual spending by a particular school in UK spanning over three decade starting from 1981. While comparing things like Teacher's Salaries, Furniture and Equipments, Resources, Salaries of Other Workers, and the insurance at an interval of 10 year. It is seen that Teacher's Salary have first been increased but subsequently decreased over next decade. Similar trend was seen in Resources. In Contrast, Spending on Furniture and Equipments have decreased and then increased sharply over next coming decade. It was also observed that Salaries of other workers were reducing at somewhat steady pace. Furthermore, there is exponential growth is seen on expenditure on insurance over the span of whole observation.

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 the total annual spending by a particular school in UK spanning You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
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from 1981. While comparing things like Teacher's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
Salaries
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Salaries
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Other Workers, and the insurance at an interval of 10 year.

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Salaries
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