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advantage and disadvantage of globalisation

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As each and every individual can easily move to another country for education and business is called globalization and majority of people are belive that we are enter the phase of globalised world. However, still other people don’t agree with the point My point are discussed in upcoming paragraphs There are several point of living in the globalised world. To begin with the foremost one, development of industry sector. As the nation are coming closure to each other the trade and service have been started between the country so that citizen of country can enjoy the benefits of using technology so that both the country can earn the foreign exchange whereas there will progress of the traders as well. Furthermore, there will be better education system. To be specific pupil can easily go another developed nation for higher and better studies as well as learning indigenous culture which will help the people to broaden their mind Moreover, people are also going to foreign country for different job purposes and learning the different skills. On the contrary, there are few drawback linked with globalization To embark with, globalization has affect many local business because many foreign business partner initiated its business in other country and the people have craze to buy foreign goods so they will not purchase the local goods For instance In India many food restaurant have been open like Mc Donald, Subways and many more has affect drastically to the local vendors. To conclude there are both merits and demerits of globalization from my point of view it has more advantage like development of industrial sector and pupil gain better education and job however it has affect many local business.
As each and every individual can
easily
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to another
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for education and
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business
is called
globalization and
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majority of
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people
are
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belive
that we are
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the phase of
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globalised
world.
However
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other
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people
don’t
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agree
with the
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point
My
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are discussed
in upcoming paragraphs

There are several
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point
of living in the
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globalised
world. To
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begin
with the foremost one, development of industry sector. As the nation are coming closure to each other the trade and service have been
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started
between the
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country
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so
that citizen of
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country
can enjoy the benefits of using technology
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so
that both the
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country
can earn the
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foreign
exchange whereas there will progress of the traders
as well
.

Furthermore
, there will be better education system. To be specific pupil can
easily
go another developed nation for higher and better studies
as well
as learning indigenous culture which will
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help
the
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people
to broaden their mind
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,
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are
also
going to
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foreign
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country
for
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different
job purposes and learning the
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skills
.

On the contrary
, there are few drawback linked with globalization To embark with, globalization has affect
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many
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local
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business
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because
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many
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foreign
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partner initiated its
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in other
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country
and the
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people
have craze to
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buy
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foreign
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goods
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so
they will not
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purchase
the
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local
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For instance
In India
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many
food restaurant have been open like
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Mc
Donald, Subways and
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many
more has affect
drastically
to the
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local
vendors.

To conclude
there are both merits and demerits of globalization from my
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point
of view it has more advantage like development of industrial sector and pupil gain better education and job
however
it has affect
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many
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local
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business
.
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IELTS essay advantage and disadvantage of globalisation

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6.0
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