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advantage and disadvantage of co education

advantage and disadvantage of co education WY7Aa
There are many advantage and disadvantage of the co education. All boys and girls learning of the institute and in the same class. They are many sharing problems with together and their get high thinking. First of all, they are lot benefits of the co education because everyone countries do same teach of boys and girls and they keep on the same level. they always ready help another. They giving full respect together. There are many disadvantages because they do secrets with one to another. they keep not high thinking. Therefore, they do not share any problems and thoughts.
There are
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many advantage
and disadvantage of the co education. All boys and girls learning of the institute and in the same
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class
. They are
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many
sharing problems with together and their
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get
high thinking.

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First of all
, they are lot benefits of the co education
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because
everyone countries do same teach of boys and
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girls and
they
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keep
on the same level.
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they
always ready
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help
another.
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They giving
full respect together.

There are
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many
disadvantages
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because
they do secrets with one to another.
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they
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keep
not high thinking.
Therefore
, they do not share any problems and thoughts.

IELTS essay advantage and disadvantage of co education

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
99 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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