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technology has changed the life Q20rP
It is quite imperative to say that ------------------------- and in my opinion the advan/disadv overweigh the adv/disadv as ( reason)--------------------------------. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend with relevant examples and thus will lead to a logical conclusion. BP 1: Proponents believe that boon of ---------------------------- and the first foremost reason behind this is that (advantage 1) ------------------------ for example ---------------------------------- hence there are striking benefits of this trend. BP 2: On the contrary, the drawbacks of this process/phenomenon should be considered and the cogent reason to bolster this fact is (reason) -------------------------------------- to illustrate ------------------------------------------------------ which can be hazardous. Conclusion: To recapitulate, although there are many arguments supporting those for and those against, in my view the adv/disadv are more significant as (example mentioned in any one para above)
It is quite imperative to say that ------------------------- and in my opinion the
advan
/
disadv
overweigh
the adv/
disadv
as
(
reason)--------------------------------
. This essay will
further
elaborate both
positive
and
negative
effects of this trend with relevant examples and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion.

BP 1:

Proponents believe that boon of ---------------------------- and the
first
foremost
reason
behind this is that (advantage 1) ------------------------
for example
----------------------------------
hence
there are striking benefits of this trend.

BP 2:

On the contrary
, the drawbacks of this process/phenomenon should
be considered
and the cogent
reason
to bolster this fact is
(reason)
-------------------------------------- to illustrate ------------------------------------------------------ which can be hazardous.

Conclusion:

To recapitulate, although there are
many
arguments supporting those for and those against, in my view the adv/
disadv
are more significant as (example mentioned in any one para above)

IELTS essay technology has changed the life

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
135 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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