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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. with this opinion? Ly81
It is a common belief that it is the best time to be alive since the improvements of the society in distincit areas. However, I firmly believe that it is not that perfect being alive nowadays. On the one hand, according to recent researchs there is an increasing trend of people suffering with mental problems. Thanks to technological developments, internet and social media are widly spread. People are getting used to share all their daily life on social media, however, people create images on social media, which are complently different from theirs in real life to fulfil the expantations of others. Morerover, many mental issues such as depression are caused by cyberbullying, while some of them who can not handle the stress even try to end their lives. Second, the average age of humans are rising, nevertheless, many of the old adults do not live happily. Since many of them have health issuses which lower their quality of life, while people may not need to suffer these physical problems if there were no significant improvemnets in medical science, since people may have died. The decrease of the life quality may cause elderly feeling meaningless or unconfident. On the other hand, some support the above statements. First, the devlopments and improvemnets of the transport cause the opportunities that people being able to travel to other countries rise, which lead to people having more opportunities to get exposed to knowlege and culture that they never knew before. These opportunities are vauleable and memorable, which people extermently hope to have in old days. Second, human are becoming more open-mined nowadays since the developemnts of society and education. Popole can accept a lot more than that in the old days, for example people are allowed to get married with people from other country that have totally different cultural background or even dating someone who have the same gender. It is undeniable that there are lots of advantages being brough by the developements in recent years. However, it has also created distinct downsides which people are try to change nowaday. In conclusion, despite opising view because of the negative effects that it caused for example the increasingly serious mental problems and elderly being not satisfactied. I firmly disagree with the view that there is no better time to be alive than now, since there must be unique difficults faced by people in distinct periods.
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distincit
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firmly
believe that it is not that perfect being alive nowadays.

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there is an increasing trend of
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widly
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are getting
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life
on social media,
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people
create images on social media, which are
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complently
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different
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life
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expantations
of others.
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,
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mental issues such as depression
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by cyberbullying, while
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. Second, the average age of humans are rising,
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of the
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adults do not
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happily
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of them have health
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which lower their quality of
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life
, while
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people
may not need to suffer these physical problems if there were no significant
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improvemnets
in medical science, since
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people
may have
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. The decrease of the
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life
quality may cause elderly feeling meaningless or unconfident.

On the
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other
hand,
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some
support the above statements.
First
, the
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devlopments
and
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improvemnets
of the transport cause the opportunities that
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people
being able to travel to
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other
countries rise, which lead to
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people
having more opportunities to
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get
exposed to
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knowlege
and culture that they never knew
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. These opportunities are
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vauleable
and memorable, which
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people
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extermently
hope to have in
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old
days. Second, human are becoming more open-mined nowadays since the
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developemnts
of society and education.
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can accept a lot more than that in the
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people
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country that have
totally
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different
cultural background or even dating someone who have the same gender.

It is undeniable that there are lots of advantages being
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brough
by the
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developements
in recent years.
However
, it has
also
created distinct downsides which
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people
are try to
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change
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nowaday
.
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satisfactied
. I
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disagree with the view that there is no better time to be alive than
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difficults
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people
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IELTS essay Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. with this opinion?

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