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Addicts and drug addiction

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A strong and hasty mafia group was illegally buying and selling narcotics They think they have sympathized with the addicts by selling drugs And have soothed them But in principle they prompted humiliated the addicts It's like sprinkling salt on a scorch And intensify the tempest of their lives The Mafia group had caused thousands of people to become addicted, and addicts had made their lives dependent on their addiction. They should have been encouraged and resume new life And be in harmony with it And refrain to use drugs.

A strong and hasty mafia group was illegally
 buying and selling narcotics They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 they have sympathized with the addicts by selling drugs And have soothed them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 in principle they prompted humiliated the addicts It's like sprinkling salt on a scorch And intensify the tempest of their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 The Mafia group had caused thousands of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to become addicted, and addicts had made their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 dependent on their addiction. Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
They should have been encouraged
 and resume new life And be in harmony with it And refrain to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 drugs. 