Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Action movies with car chases will show impact on young drivers? Do you agree with it

Action movies with car chases will show impact on young drivers? Do you agree with it YBERr
Concerning the issue of car chases in films, it might surely show impact on youngsters to encourage them to drive too hasty. Undoubtedly, youth would be attracted to movies and they even don't reckon that it's just an act which is planned already. Firstly, Youth must be aware of rash drives and chases which is shown in flims that they are just a part of entertainment. I could give an example of ample number of adults who have inspired by car chases which was shown in numerous Hollywood films. Obviously, Grown-ups deem to practice the stunts which was done by hero's in films Definitely, it's our responsibility to guide youngsters in the way they drive. They should be motivated to drive in speed limits and also to follow traffic rules to aviod accidental issues. Clearly, it have been seen in a host of countries that death rate caused by accidents are in abundunt during past two decades. Moreover, it is noticed that majorly youth are prone to more accidents than aged-masses. Finally, I wish to conclude that films are just a part of fun and action. Many impossibilities will be illustrated in movies as it needs to presented in a coordinated way, consequently matures must be aware and additionally they must be known the results of car chases and rash drives which leads to injuries and even fatals
Concerning the issue of car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
chases
in films, it might
surely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
impact on youngsters to encourage them to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drive
too hasty.
Undoubtedly
, youth would
be attracted
to
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
movies and
they even don't reckon that it's
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
an act which
is planned
already.

Firstly
, Youth
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be aware of rash
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drives
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
chases
which
is shown
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
flims
that they are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a part of entertainment. I could give an example of ample number of adults who have inspired by car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
chases
which
was shown
in numerous Hollywood films.
Obviously
, Grown-ups deem to practice the stunts which
was done
by hero's in films

Definitely, it's our responsibility to guide youngsters in the way they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drive
. They should
be motivated
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drive
in speed limits and
also
to follow traffic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
to
Possible spelling mistake found.
aviod
accidental issues.
Clearly
, it
Did you mean "has"?
have
been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in a host of countries that death rate caused by accidents are in
Possible spelling mistake found.
abundunt
during past two decades.
Moreover
, it
is noticed
that
majorly
youth are prone to more accidents than aged-masses.
Finally
, I wish
to conclude
that films are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a part of fun and action.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
impossibilities will
be illustrated
in movies as it needs to presented in a coordinated way,
consequently
matures
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be aware and
additionally
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be known
the results of car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
chases
and rash
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drives
which leads to injuries and even
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
fatals
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Action movies with car chases will show impact on young drivers? Do you agree with it

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
227 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts