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According to both the passage and the lecture, using reusable bags is a good way to protect the environment. As a wise consumer, what else can you do to protect the environment?

According to both the passage and the lecture, using reusable bags is a good way to protect the environment. As a wise consumer, what else can you do to protect the environment? nVq5E
The environment is where we live, where we develop every day, and where various types of animals and plants are born. We must preserve it, therefore. There are numerous alternative methods to tackle this problem besides utilizing reusable bags to help the environment First of all, enormous emphasis needs to be paid not to litter. There are a lot of plastic bags, bottles, food packages, . . . littered in places like beaches, monuments, and markets. Litter is the most harmful to the environment because it only rots and pollutes the environment. The best thing we can do to protect the environment is not litter. Make it a habit to properly dispose of trash in the dustbin. If you don't see a person around you then wait until you see one. Likewise, the conservation of forests should be a concern for everyone. Forests are important to the environment. Deforestation, however, undoubtedly lowers the world's forest acreage. The government needs to initiate forest conservation projects. The government must criminalize harmful forests. Finally, the protection of soils is another essential means of protecting the environment. Landslides, floods, and soil erosion must be monitored for this. In addition, afforestation and tree plantation should be provided for the conservation of the soil. Furthermore, there are some techniques to farm terraces and to use natural fertilizers. Environmental protection lies in people's hands. It is only people who can take initiative and conserve the environment to save life on the globe.
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environment
is where we
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live
, where we develop every day, and where various types of animals and plants
are born
. We
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must
preserve it,
therefore
. There are numerous alternative methods to tackle this problem
besides
utilizing reusable bags to
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help
the environment

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First of all
, enormous emphasis needs to
be paid
not to litter. There are
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a lot of
plastic bags, bottles, food packages
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.
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littered
in places like beaches, monuments, and markets. Litter is the most harmful to the
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environment
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because
it
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only
rots and pollutes the
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environment
. The best thing we can do to protect the
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environment
is not litter.
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Make
it a habit to
properly
dispose of trash in the dustbin. If you don't
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see
a person around you then wait until you
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see
one.

Likewise
, the conservation of
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forests
should be a concern for everyone.
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Forests
are
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important
to the
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environment
. Deforestation,
however
,
undoubtedly
lowers the world's
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forest
acreage. The
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government
needs to initiate
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forest
conservation projects. The
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government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
criminalize harmful forests.

Finally
, the protection of soils is another essential means of protecting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
. Landslides, floods, and soil erosion
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be monitored
for this.
In addition
, afforestation and tree plantation should
be provided
for the conservation of the soil.
Furthermore
, there are
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some
techniques to farm terraces and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
natural fertilizers. Environmental protection lies in
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people
's hands. It is
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only
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people
who can take initiative and conserve the
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environment
to save life on the globe.
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IELTS essay According to both the passage and the lecture, using reusable bags is a good way to protect the environment. As a wise consumer, what else can you do to protect the environment?

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