According to a number of people believes music
According to a number of people believes music pWB2
According to a number of people believes music, art, and drama are vital essential subjects in schools instead of other courses, albeit others not agree with this theory. In my opinion, these subjects are more critical than other school lessons.
On one hand, Somehow disagree with the degree of importance of these arts are saying that these lessons are not significant abundance in early level in the school. Firstly, They believe other lessons like mathematics and biology are the principles of studying. Consequently, pupils should be spent more time on these subjects. Secondly, they suppose the harmful effect of less care on these lessons has directly affected the future of pupil. The outcome of this neglect will be they can find appropriate jobs in the future. For example, a plethora of jobs requires other skills and nobody cares about your knowledge in music, art, and drama.
On the other hand, People consider that music, art, and drama are crucial and exactly in the early level of studying. First, learning these types of subjects is essential for mental health and will help pupils to learn efficiently other subjects. For example, music has always required relaxation and assistance in the learning process. Second is these activities are more comfortable to learn at the elementary level of study. By Less spending time at the first step of learning improving in the future will be difficult because young people can learn better than other ages.
In conclusion, despite a number of disagreements such as the degree of importance and less care on other lessons, I strongly agree to care about music, art, and drama which help students have intact mental and the difficulty of learning in the future.
According to a number of
people
believes
music
,
art
, and drama are vital essential
subjects
in schools
instead
of
other
courses, albeit others not
agree
with this theory. In my opinion, these
subjects
are more critical than
other
school lessons.
On one hand, Somehow disagree with the degree of importance of these
arts
are saying that these
lessons
are not significant abundance in early level in the school.
Firstly
, They believe
other
lessons
like mathematics and biology are the principles of studying.
Consequently
, pupils should
be spent
more time on these
subjects
.
Secondly
, they suppose the harmful effect of less
care
on these
lessons
has
directly
affected
the
future
of pupil. The outcome of this neglect will be they can find appropriate jobs in the
future
.
For example
, a plethora of jobs requires
other
skills
and nobody
cares
about your knowledge in
music
,
art
, and drama.
On the
other
hand,
People
consider that
music
,
art
, and drama are crucial and exactly in the early level of studying.
First
,
learning
these types of
subjects
is essential for mental health and will
help
pupils to learn
efficiently
other
subjects
.
For example
,
music
has always required relaxation and assistance in the
learning
process. Second is these activities are more comfortable to learn at the elementary level of study. By Less spending time at the
first
step of
learning
improving
in the
future
will be difficult
because
young
people
can learn better than
other
ages.
In conclusion
, despite a number of disagreements such as the degree of importance and less
care
on
other
lessons
, I
strongly
agree
to
care
about
music
,
art
, and drama which
help
students have intact mental and the difficulty of
learning
in the
future
.