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Write at least 200 words about the following topic. Air pollution is becoming more serious in many big cities. What are the reasons for this problem? Suggest at least two solutions to deal with the situation.

about the following topic. Air pollution is becoming more serious in many big cities. What are the reasons for this problem? Suggest at least two solutions to deal with the situation. j5L7d
It is obvious that pollution is a huge problem in over the world, especially air pollution in many modern cities. Now, I am going to talk about the reasons of causing this kind of pollution and solutions to face up to this issue. Firstly, in my opinion there are three main reasons causing air pollution. In some countries, it is too much exhaust fumes from private vehicles, factories, constructions…etc. For instance, Vietnamese people use their own transport such as: motorbikes, cars, …etc, which produce lots of harmful fumes. Furthermore, the fresh atmosphere depends on people lifestyle because if they always smoke cigarettes or make a high carbon footprint score, it damage on not only the air but also water, soil…and so on. Moreover, some activities impacting on the environment like deforestation need to be banned. And the last reason is the method of dealing with rubbish like firing the garbage…etc. For some reasons above, we should make no effects on the environment especially the air anymore. Secondly, to discuss about the solutions of this problem, I have some ideas that reduce the level of air pollution. One of the easiest things we can do immediately that we should use public transport like bus – the popular transport in almost countries. On the other hand, we need to change our lifestyle. For example, using canvas bag or biological bag is more environmentally friendly than using plastic bag when we go shopping. To avoid some breathing problems of air pollution, the government advised people wear mask whenever going out. And last one, planting more trees is always a good idea to practice. In short, we have many ways to protect the environment, so just do it for better life. In conclusion, air pollution is a serious problem that people need to take responsibility to protect the atmosphere. We should spend more time finding out the reasons of this problem and have great ways to solve them.
It is obvious that
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pollution
is a huge
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problem
in over the world,
especially
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air
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pollution
in
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many
modern cities.
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Now
, I am going to talk about the
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reasons
of causing this kind of
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pollution
and solutions to face up to this issue.

Firstly
, in my opinion there are three main
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reasons
causing
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air
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pollution
. In
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some
countries, it is too much exhaust fumes from private vehicles, factories, constructions…etc.
For instance
, Vietnamese
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people
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use
their
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own
transport such as: motorbikes, cars, …etc, which produce lots of harmful fumes.
Furthermore
, the fresh atmosphere depends on
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people
lifestyle
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because
if they always smoke cigarettes or
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make
a high carbon footprint score, it
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damage
on not
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only
the
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air
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but
also
water, soil…and
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so
on.
Moreover
,
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some
activities impacting on the environment like deforestation need to
be banned
. And the last
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reason
is the method of dealing with rubbish like firing the garbage…etc. For
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some
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reasons
above, we should
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make
no effects on the environment
especially
the
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air
anymore.

Secondly
, to
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discuss about the
solutions of this
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problem
, I have
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some
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ideas
that
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reduce
the level of
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air
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pollution
. One of the easiest things we can do immediately that we should
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use
public transport like bus
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–
the popular transport in almost countries.
On the other hand
, we need to
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change
our lifestyle.
For example
, using canvas bag or biological bag is more
environmentally
friendly than using plastic bag when we go shopping. To avoid
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some
breathing
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problems
of
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air
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pollution
, the
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government
advised
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people
wear mask whenever going out. And last one, planting more trees is always a
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good
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idea
to practice. In short, we have
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many
ways to protect the environment,
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so
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just
do it for better life.

In conclusion
,
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air
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pollution
is a serious
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problem
that
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people
need to take responsibility to protect the atmosphere. We should spend more time finding out the
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reasons
of this
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problem
and have great ways to solve them.
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IELTS essay about the following topic. Air pollution is becoming more serious in many big cities. What are the reasons for this problem? Suggest at least two solutions to deal with the situation.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
324 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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