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about something that you own and which is very important to you now.

about something that you own and which is very important to you now. gqbYl

I would like to talk about my alarm clock. I first saw it when i and my father went to the store together, my father bought it and gave it to me on my 14th birthday. My alarm clock is made of metal and painted in very durable orange paint. I never worry about it getting scratched. The face of it is round and made of transparent glass. Inside, the numbers are blue and evenly spaced. It stands out against the yellow background. In particular, the numbers can glow at night. So, I can see the time in the dark easily. My clock has four clockwise with different colours. The shortest hand indicates the hour, the thinnest is the minute hand, and the longest is the second hand. And the other hand is red. I use it to set an alarm. They work well together, never being out of time. Two bells are put on the clock, which looks like the ears of it. And it also has a metal base, so I can put it on my desk. Since the time I got my clock, no one has borrowed it. But if they want to borrow, I will happily agree. I think it will also bring many benefits to them, and that makes me happy. I hope they will take care of it as well as I did and return it as soon as possible because it is really important to me. The clock wakes me up every morning, reminding me to go to bed at the same time every night. So, I have never been late to school. The clock helps me manage my time better, work out a plan, and appreciate my time.

I would like to talk about my alarm You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
clock
. I first
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saw
 it when i and my father went to the store together, my father This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 it and gave it to me on my 14th birthday.

My alarm You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
clock
is made
 of metal and painted in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 durable orange paint. I never worry about it getting scratched. The face of it is round and made of transparent glass. Inside, the numbers are blue and evenly
 spaced. It stands out against the yellow background. In particular
, the numbers can glow at night. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
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time
 in the dark easily
. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
clock
 has four clockwise with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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colours
. The shortest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgripfistpalm
hand
 indicates the hour, the thinnest is the minute You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgripfistpalm
hand
, and the longest is the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgripfistpalm
hand
. And the other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgripfistpalm
hand
is red
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it to set an alarm. They work well together, never being out of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
. Two bells are put
 on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
clock
, which looks like the ears of it. And it also
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so
 I can put it on my desk.

Since the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
clock
, no one has borrowed it. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 if they want to borrow, I will happily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it will also
 bring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 benefits to them, and that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 me happy. I hope they will take care of it as well
 as I did and return it as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to me.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
clock
 wakes me up every morning, reminding me to go to bed at the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 every night. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I have never been late to school. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalarmtimer
clock
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me manage my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 better, work out a plan, and appreciate my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
. 