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About Ronnie Coleman and his career

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Ronnie Coleman is a professional American bodybuilder. He is eight time mister Olympia and he won many other titles. He started his career as a martial artist. In 1990 he made his debut to the Mr. Olympia and he was placed 15th. And the coming 4 years he was not placed in top 10. Even then he didn't give up, he came back in 1996 and won his first Olympia. Since then he won eight years in a row. This is the record and the first person to win eight times in a row. As far as his physical characteristics are concerned he is 6 foot 1 inch and weights 300 pounds. He can squat up to 800 pounds for 2 reps ( regrets till today, he thinks he can do 5 reps ). He can deadlift 800 pounds for 2 reps and can leg press more than 2200 pounds ( unbelievable ). And he is an inspiration for many people.
Ronnie Coleman is a professional American bodybuilder. He is eight time mister
Olympia and
he won
many
other titles. He
started
his career as a martial artist. In
1990 he
made his debut to the Mr.
Olympia and
he
was placed
15th. And the coming 4 years he was not placed in top 10. Even then he didn't give up, he came back in 1996 and won his
first
Olympia.
Since
then he
won eight years in a row. This is the record and the
first
person to win eight times in a row.

As far as his physical characteristics
are concerned
he is 6 foot
1 inch
and weights
300 pounds
. He can squat up to
800 pounds
for 2 reps
(
regrets till
today
, he
thinks
he can do 5 reps
)
. He can
deadlift
800 pounds
for 2 reps and can leg press more than
2200 pounds
(
unbelievable
)
.

And he is an inspiration for
many
people
.
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IELTS essay About Ronnie Coleman and his career

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