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About my hometown and discribe it

About my hometown and discribe it Eqlpb
My hometown is a small city that it called Khoramabad. It's located in betweem tow mauntain and in the city centre there is a big castel a top of the small hill, and a wild river. When I was a child I leaved there with my family but we transfer to another city now when I go there it's a crowded city that you must spend many time in terrafic, sometims I go there with my daughter and I see she is very exited to see that there is a river in center of city and sometims we climb to mountain with my frinds that are living there
My hometown is a
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small
city that it called
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Khoramabad
. It's located in
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betweem
tow
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mauntain
and in the city
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centre
there is a
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big
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castel
a top of the
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small
hill, and a wild river. When I was a child I leaved there with my family
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but
we transfer to another city
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now
when I go there it's a crowded city that you
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must
spend
Did you mean "many times" or "much time"?
many time
in
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terrafic
,
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sometims
I go there with my daughter and I
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see
she is
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very
Did you mean "excited" (=enthusiastic) instead of 'exited' (=gone away)?
exited
to
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see
that there is a river in center of city and
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sometims
we climb to mountain with my
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frinds
that are living
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there
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IELTS essay About my hometown and discribe it

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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