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About my hometown and discribe it

About my hometown and discribe it Eqlpb

My hometown is a small city that it called Khoramabad. It's located in betweem tow mauntain and in the city centre there is a big castel a top of the small hill, and a wild river. When I was a child I leaved there with my family but we transfer to another city now when I go there it's a crowded city that you must spend many time in terrafic, sometims I go there with my daughter and I see she is very exited to see that there is a river in center of city and sometims we climb to mountain with my frinds that are living there

My hometown is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 city that it called Possible spelling mistake found.Moradabad
Khoramabad
. It's located in Possible spelling mistake found.between
betweem
 tow Possible spelling mistake found.maintainmountain
mauntain
 and in the city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 there is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
Possible spelling mistake found.castlecastecartelcastespastelcaster
castel
 a top of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 hill, and a wild river. When I was a child I leaved there with my family This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we transfer to another city This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 when I go there it's a crowded city that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 spend Did you mean "many times" or "much time"?many timesmuch time
many time
 in Possible spelling mistake found.terrific
terrafic
, Possible spelling mistake found.sometimessometime
sometims
 I go there with my daughter and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 she is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Did you mean "excited" (=enthusiastic) instead of 'exited' (=gone away)?excited
exited
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that there is a river in center of city and Possible spelling mistake found.sometimessometime
sometims
 we climb to mountain with my Possible spelling mistake found.friendsfindsfrondsgrindsrindsFriends
frinds
 that are living Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthere.there!there?there:there,there;
there