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I want to discribe my hometown

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My hometown is a small city that located in the west of Iran, it is between tow tall and huge montains in fact it's a valley and in the past it called Khoramdareh it means green valley, it's sutable name for this city because when you see it atop of mauntain it is a very beautifal. Especially in the spring its look like a big garden with fantastic colors that mixed togather and buildings are covered with trees, and in the fall it seems to a kind of carpet or a painting. There is a big castle in top of a hill in downtown it was a kind of home for living governer and below that a river is flowing. For this reason this city has many bridge for conected different patr of city to gather
My hometown is a
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small
city that located in the west of Iran, it is between tow tall and huge
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montains
in fact it's a valley and in the past it called
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Khoramdareh
it means green valley, it's
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sutable
name for this city
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because
when you
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see
it atop of
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mauntain
it is a
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very
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beautifal
.
Especially
in the spring its look like a
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big
garden with fantastic colors that mixed
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togather
and buildings
are covered
with trees, and in the fall it seems to a kind of carpet or a painting. There is a
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big
castle in top of a hill in downtown it was a kind of home for living
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governer
and below that a river is flowing.
For this reason
this city has
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many bridge
for
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conected
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different
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patr
of city to
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gather

IELTS essay I want to discribe my hometown

Essay
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1 paragraphs
135 words
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