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I want to discribe my hometown

I want to discribe my hometown kL6en

My hometown is a small city that located in the west of Iran, it is between tow tall and huge montains in fact it's a valley and in the past it called Khoramdareh it means green valley, it's sutable name for this city because when you see it atop of mauntain it is a very beautifal. Especially in the spring its look like a big garden with fantastic colors that mixed togather and buildings are covered with trees, and in the fall it seems to a kind of carpet or a painting. There is a big castle in top of a hill in downtown it was a kind of home for living governer and below that a river is flowing. For this reason this city has many bridge for conected different patr of city to gather

My hometown is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 city that located in the west of Iran, it is between tow tall and huge Possible spelling mistake found.containsmountains
montains
 in fact it's a valley and in the past it called Possible spelling mistake found.
Khoramdareh
 it means green valley, it's Possible spelling mistake found.stablesuitablemutable
sutable
 name for this city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 when you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 it atop of Possible spelling mistake found.maintainmountain
mauntain
 it is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Possible spelling mistake found.beautiful
beautifal
. Especially
 in the spring its look like a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 garden with fantastic colors that mixed Possible spelling mistake found.togetherto gather
togather
 and buildings are covered
 with trees, and in the fall it seems to a kind of carpet or a painting. There is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 castle in top of a hill in downtown it was a kind of home for living Possible spelling mistake found.governorGovernorgovernedgovern er
governer
 and below that a river is flowing. For this reason
 this city has Possible agreement error. The noun bridge seems to be countable; consider using: "many bridges".many bridges
many bridge
 for Possible spelling mistake found.connected
conected
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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patr
 of city to Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphgather.gather!gather?gather:gather,gather;
gather