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Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world. However, people are being encouraged to use

Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world. However, people are being encouraged to use 0EDPB
fossil fuels such as petrol and diesel are vital source of energy around the global while, masses are being connect to use alternative energy sources like wind and solar energy. I believe that this id a positive development in nations due to some dominant reasons which i will discuss in subsequent paragraphs. To commerce with, if multitudes are moving towards wind and solar energy side, therefore its choose automobile vehicles rather than engines transportation. To elaborate it, in this modern days number of oil base vehicles incline each passing day which are produce pollution moreover, if people encouraged to use alternative sources they save environment because of these energies are eco-friendly. For instance, in America recently had released automobile car by a company which are fully automatic and run by a solar energy. Thus, air pollution ratio will be decline. Furthermore, its help to save money as well as fossil fuels due to the fact solar cars produce energy by its own and save in battery for further use. To explain it, when multitudes move on solar cars than they save their previous time and vital fuels due to masses prefer to use this kind of vehicles and may prices of fuel become low as usage of fuel decline. For example, TESLA car is sell by multinational company and its cover approximately 599 km distance after recharge. Hence, travel easier without usage of fuel and demand of Russel fuels will become low. To conclude, using eco-friendly energy are beneficial for living things and environment while its save time and money as well as consumption of fuels declined.
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fossil
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fuels
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energy
around the global while, masses are being connect to
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use
alternative
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energy
sources like wind and
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solar
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energy
. I believe that this id a
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positive
development in nations due to
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some
dominant reasons which
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solar
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energy
side,
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rather
than engines transportation. To elaborate it, in this modern days number of oil base vehicles incline each passing day which are produce pollution
moreover
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people
encouraged to
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use
alternative sources they
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environment
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of these
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energies
are eco-friendly.
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, in America recently had released automobile
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by a
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company
which are
fully
automatic and run by a
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solar
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energy
.
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save
money
as well
as fossil
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fuels
due to the fact
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solar
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cars
produce
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energy
by its
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in battery for
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than they
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save
their previous time and vital
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fuels
due to masses prefer to
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use
this kind of vehicles and may prices of
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fuel
become low as usage of
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fuel
decline.
For example
, TESLA
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car
is sell by multinational
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company
and its cover approximately 599 km distance after recharge.
Hence
, travel easier without usage of
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fuel
and demand of Russel
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fuels
will become low.

To conclude
, using eco-friendly
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energy
are beneficial for living things and environment while its
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save
time and money
as well
as consumption of
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fuels
declined.
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IELTS essay Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world. However, people are being encouraged to use

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4 paragraphs
266 words
6.5
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