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Abortion should be made illegal since it is inhuman. To what extent do you agree/ disagree with the issue? Give examples, explanation or any relevant evidence to illustrate your viewpoint.

Abortion should be made illegal since it is inhuman. Give examples, explanation or any relevant evidence to illustrate your viewpoint. RRDjP
Currently, there is a lot of controversy surrounding whether abortion should be considered illegal or not. I disagree with the fact that abortion is illegal. Because in cases when health does not allow and the pregnancy is not desired, a woman has the right to have an abortion to ensure her life. On the one hand, consider the ethics of abortion. It is always said that abortion is inhumane and immoral because it kills an unborn life in the womb. So the morality of this issue is calculated on the basis of protecting a person's right to life, but in other respects it is not ethical. If the pregnancy is the result of a rape or the woman is not ready and financially ready, the man denies responsibility. When a child is born without love, even abandoned right from birth. For instance, a newborn baby was left under a manhole for 40 hours outside without clothes in Hanoi in 2020. It is unethical and unfair to the child. Giving born a baby and then leaving it to die in agony is more inhumane than abortion before the baby has the feeling of pain. On the other hand, abortion in cases when the woman's health is not guaranteed is necessary. The issue of abortion in the case of a woman with poor health such as: cancer, HIV-infected patient, heart disease, diabetes, etc can be considered urgent and cannot be called inhuman. Because when the mother is seriously ill but still pregnant, it can lead to birth defects or serious deterioration of the mother's health if not treated with strong drugs. In addition, abortion should not be done when the pregnancy is 4 months or more because at this time the baby is aware of the pain and adversely affects the mother's health. For instance, people undergoing cancer treatment should not become pregnant because most cancer drugs contain toxins that can affect the fetus. In conclusion, the situation does not permit and the pregnancy is not wanted, a woman has the privilege to have a fetus removal to guarantee her life. Moreover, morality is only relative because in the world everything has both good and bad sides, there is no way to solve the problem perfectly. Therefore, abortion should depend on each woman's case to have an appropriate solution.
Currently
, there is
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a lot of
controversy surrounding whether
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abortion
should
be considered
illegal or not. I
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disagree with the fact that
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abortion
is illegal.
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Because
in cases when
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health
does not
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allow
and the pregnancy is not desired, a
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woman
has the right to have an
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abortion
to ensure her life.

On the one hand, consider the ethics of
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abortion
. It is always said that
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abortion
is inhumane and immoral
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because
it kills an unborn life in the womb.
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So
the morality of this issue
is calculated
on the basis of protecting a person's right to life,
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but
in other respects it is not ethical. If the pregnancy is the result of a rape or the
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woman
is not ready and
financially
ready, the
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man
denies responsibility. When a child
is born
without
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love
, even abandoned right from birth.
For instance
, a newborn baby was
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left
under a manhole for 40 hours outside without clothes in Hanoi in 2020. It is unethical and unfair to the child. Giving born a baby and then leaving it to
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die
in agony is more inhumane than
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abortion
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before
the baby has the feeling of pain.

On the other hand
,
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abortion
in cases when the woman's
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health
is not guaranteed is necessary. The issue of
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abortion
in the case of a
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woman
with poor
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health
such as: cancer, HIV-infected patient, heart disease, diabetes, etc can
be considered
urgent and cannot
be called
inhuman.
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Because
when the mother is
seriously
ill
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but
still
pregnant, it can lead to birth defects or serious deterioration of the mother's
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health
if not treated with strong drugs.
In addition
,
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abortion
should not
be done
when the pregnancy is 4 months or more
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because
at this time the baby is aware of the pain and
adversely
affects the mother's
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health
.
For instance
,
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people
undergoing cancer treatment should not become pregnant
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because
most cancer drugs contain toxins that can affect the fetus.

In conclusion
, the situation does not permit and the pregnancy is not wanted, a
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woman
has the privilege to have a fetus removal to guarantee her life.
Moreover
, morality is
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only
relative
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because
in the world everything has both
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good
and
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bad
sides, there is no way to solve the problem
perfectly
.
Therefore
,
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abortion
should depend on each woman's case to have an appropriate solution.
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IELTS essay Abortion should be made illegal since it is inhuman. Give examples, explanation or any relevant evidence to illustrate your viewpoint.

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