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Agreement: Parents are the best teachers

Agreement: Parents are the best teachers 9w85r
‘Whether parents are our best teachers or not’ is a never-ending debate and people are divided both in favour and against this argument. Both have a very strong contribution and influence on a child’s learning but in my opinion, parents overtake the teachers in terms of teaching their children. First of all, I would like to point out that a teacher is not merely a person who takes a text book and read texts from there to a student. Rather a teacher is someone who devotes his/her times to teach someone everything that someone needs to know to advance to next step. Morality, intricacies of life, subject matter knowledge, art, science, history, value of time etc. are something that can’t be taught through academic books and a good teacher is someone who teaches someone these all. Now that we know the true responsibility of a teacher, we can easily compare our parents and teachers. The things that we learn from our parents are far more important than what we learn from our teachers. I am not denying the invaluable knowledge we learn from our teachers through our academic years, but what we learn from our parents are incomparable. We learn to survive, talk, and distinguish well from bad, values of life, morality and such important other things from our parents. We are the true reflection of our parents and our characters are shaped by their personality and behaviours. Later the teachers help us to enhance our knowledge, horizon and our view of life but the very foundation and ground are made by our parents. The parents sacrifice so many things of their life just to ensure a better life for us and nothing in this whole world could even be compared with their sacrifice for us. Think of a student who is unable to pay his/her monthly school fees would be cast away from the school and the beloved teachers would scarcely be there to help him/her. On the other hand, the parents would always be there with their every possible effort to help the child. In summary, the things we learn from our teachers are important for our lives and with those valuable lessons and knowledge we prepare for the future but the things we learn from our parents shapes who we are, who we become and their contribution is much more important compared to the contribution of the traditional academic teachers and that’s why in my opinion parents are best teachers.
‘Whether
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are our best
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or not’ is a never-ending debate and
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people
are divided
both in
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favour
and against this argument. Both have a
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very
strong contribution and influence on a child’s learning
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but
in my opinion,
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parents
overtake the
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teachers
in terms of teaching their children.

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First of all
, I would like to point out that a
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teacher
is not
merely
a person
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who
takes a text book and read texts from there to a student.
Rather
a
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teacher
is
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someone
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who
devotes his/her times to teach
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someone
everything that
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someone
needs to know to advance to
next
step. Morality, intricacies of
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life
,
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subject matter
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knowledge
, art, science, history, value of time etc. are something that can’t
be taught
through academic books and a
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good
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teacher
is
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someone
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who
teaches
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someone
these all.

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Now
that we know the true responsibility of a
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teacher
, we can
easily
compare our
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parents
and
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teachers
. The things that we
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learn
from our
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parents
are far more
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important
than what we
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learn
from our
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teachers
. I
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am not denying
the invaluable
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knowledge
we
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learn
from our
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teachers
through our academic years,
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but
what we
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learn
from our
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parents
are incomparable. We
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learn
to survive, talk, and distinguish well from
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bad
, values of
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life
, morality and such
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important
other things from our
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parents
. We are the true reflection of our
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parents
and our characters
are shaped
by their personality and
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behaviours
. Later the
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teachers
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help
us to enhance our
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knowledge
, horizon and our view of
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life
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but
the
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very
foundation and ground
are made
by our parents.

The
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parents
sacrifice
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so
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many
things of their
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life
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just
to ensure a better
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life
for us and nothing in this whole world could even
be compared
with their sacrifice for us.
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Think
of a student
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who
is unable to pay his/her monthly school fees would
be cast
away from the school and the beloved
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teachers
would
scarcely
be there to
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help
him/her.
On the other hand
, the
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parents
would always be there with their every possible effort to
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help
the child.

In summary, the things we
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learn
from our
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teachers
are
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important
for our
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lives
and with those valuable lessons and
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knowledge
we prepare for the future
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but
the things we
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learn
from our
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parents
shapes
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who
we are,
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who
we become and their contribution is much more
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important
compared to the contribution of the traditional academic
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teachers
and that’s why in my opinion
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parents
A determiner is probably missing here: "are the best".
are best
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teachers
.
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IELTS essay Agreement: Parents are the best teachers

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
413 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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