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traffic congestion causes serious effects on people. What are the solutions for this problem?

traffic congestion causes serious effects on people. What are the solutions for this problem? 1amnM
Today, the more society develops, the more problems we need to solve. Traffic congestion is one of the most serious problems which causes bad effects on people. In order to improve this issue, in my point of view, there are some main solutions. The first and foremost answer is that the government should encourage people to use public transport such as buses and trains instead of private vehicles. It would help to reduce the number of vehicles on roads, which can decrease traffic jams during rush hours. When the government imposes high taxes on only private vehicles which makes people choose public vehicles instead of private vehicles. In addition, the taxation makes an amount of money that can be used to upgrade the road system or bus system so that it can be cheap and convenient for people to use every day. The second solution is that strict rules should be enforced. Every day, we usually easily catch images of traffic violations of drivers. Therefore, the government should have heavier punishments than before. For instance, the penalty should be increased on jumping red lights or not using a helmet. This helps participants obey traffic law. As a result, the traffic congestion is improved In conclusion, I believe that fewer vehicles, improvement of the road system, good public transportation, and strict rules are key measures for the government to solve the traffic jam.
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congestion is one of the most serious problems which causes
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main solutions. The
first
and foremost answer is that the
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government
should encourage
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people
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use
public transport such as buses and trains
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vehicles
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on roads, which can decrease
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jams during rush hours.
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imposes high taxes on
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private
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every day. The second solution is that strict
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should
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. Every day, we
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catch images of
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violations of drivers.
Therefore
, the
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government
should have heavier punishments than
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before
.
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, the penalty should
be increased
on jumping red lights or not using a helmet. This
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helps
participants obey
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law.
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, the
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congestion is
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improved


In conclusion
, I believe that fewer
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vehicles
, improvement of the road system,
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good
public transportation, and strict
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rules
are key measures for the
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government
to solve the
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traffic
jam.
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IELTS essay traffic congestion causes serious effects on people. What are the solutions for this problem?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
232 words
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