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A university education should be provided free of charge to all interested scholars. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Use examples and reasons to support your position. v.1

A university education should be provided free of charge to all interested scholars. Use examples and reasons to support your position. v. 1
Marketing trend in this contemporary world has taken a different shape. Today, companies are advertising more on social media. They target the frequently used websites or applications to advertise their products. This way social marketing has become successful in alluring the young generations. However, the old age people still do not prefer buying the things online. On the one side, while using the social website or applications, we come across multiple products which are advertised mostly using. The way the items are represented cannot be ignored and people, especially the youngsters get attracted to those. Products are recommended based on the search patterns of users. For example, if we have searched some gadgets, recommendations will be made according to the search we made. On the flip side, old people are not comfortable buying products online. They are not satisfied with the quality of material sold through internet. They believe that these are the marketing strategies to sell low quality products by showing lower prices. For example, my mother is always reluctant to buy items having heavy discounts on that. She believes that if we are paying less, somewhere, we are compromising on quality. They are not convinced with the price as well. They always prefer going to the market, bargaining with the shopkeeper and get the best product as per their needs. In conclusion, it is undeniable that social marketing is fascinating for the current generation, but they should buy the articles as per their requirements instead of purchasing the useless things. Also, the older generation should upgrade themselves to use the latest technologies and internet.
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trend in this contemporary world has taken a
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different
shape.
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Today
,
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companies
are advertising more on
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social
media. They target the
frequently
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used
websites or applications to advertise their
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products
. This way
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social
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marketing
has become successful in alluring the young generations.
However
, the
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old
age
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people
still
do not prefer buying the things online.

On the one side, while using the
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social
website or applications, we
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come
across multiple
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products
which
are advertised
mostly
using. The way the items
are represented
cannot be
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ignored
and
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people
,
especially
the youngsters
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get
attracted to those.
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Products
are recommended
based on the search patterns of users.
For example
, if we have searched
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some
gadgets, recommendations will
be made
according to the search we made.

On the flip side,
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old
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people
are not comfortable buying
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products
online. They are not satisfied with the quality of material sold through internet. They believe that these are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
marketing
strategies to sell low quality
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
by showing lower prices.
For example
, my mother is always reluctant to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
items having heavy discounts on that. She believes that if we are paying less, somewhere, we are compromising on quality. They are not convinced with the price
as well
. They always prefer going to the market, bargaining with the shopkeeper and
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get
the best
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product
as per their needs.

In conclusion
, it is undeniable that
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social
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marketing
is fascinating for the
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current
generation,
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but
they should
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buy
the articles as per their requirements
instead
of purchasing the useless things.
Also
, the older generation should upgrade themselves to
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use
the latest technologies and internet.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay A university education should be provided free of charge to all interested scholars. Use examples and reasons to support your position. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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