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A time when you were disappointed.

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There are times in life when things don't go the way we want and make us disappointed. The first time I felt down on myself was about 3 years ago when I was a senior in middle school. I remember very well, that morning I was shocked when I got my mock test results. It's surprising that a good student in the class like me has almost the worst grade in the class. My mother went to school that afternoon to review my mock test results with the teacher. After returning home, she didn't scold me but I could feel her disappointment towards me. Even I felt disappointed and ashamed of myself. That made coming to class boring, so my mother offered me a day at home to reconsider my studies. Then I realized that when faced with the first level exam of my life, I was too subjective and defy it. I had such poor results because of my overconfidence in myself.
There are times in life when things don't go the way we want and
make
us disappointed. The
first
time I felt down on myself was about 3 years ago when I was a senior in middle school. I remember
very
well, that morning I
was shocked
when I
got
my mock
test
results. It's surprising that a
good
student in the
class
like me has almost the worst grade in the
class
. My mother went to school that afternoon to review my mock
test
results with the teacher. After returning home, she didn't scold me
but
I could feel her disappointment towards me. Even I felt disappointed and ashamed of myself. That made coming to
class
boring,
so
my mother offered me a day at home to reconsider my studies. Then I realized that when faced with the
first
level exam of my life, I was too subjective and defy it. I had such poor results
because
of my overconfidence in myself.
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IELTS essay A time when you were disappointed.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
163 words
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