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A short story about losing necklace

A short story about losing necklace 2am3X

For many years I took care of that necklace and never took it far because it was the only relic left from my happy days with my grandmother one day I put my necklace in my bag when I was sitting on the bus and my bag accidentally fell and the necklace was thrown out of it. I put it back in the bag and went home, I searched the bag to find the necklace, but I did not find anything. I looked everywhere at home, at work, I even went to the bus company, but there was no news of Granbamd. I became the same cold and depressed girl I was before. One day I decided to wash my bag and when I took it out of the washing machine, I saw that the necklace was inside.

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many
 years I took care of that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrandjewelrychokerpendant
necklace
 and never took it far This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it was the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 relic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 from my happy days with my grandmother

one day I put my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrandjewelrychokerpendant
necklace
 in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 when I was sitting on the bus and my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
accidentally
 fell and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrandjewelrychokerpendant
necklace
was thrown
 out of it. I put it back in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 and went home, I searched the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 to find the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrandjewelrychokerpendant
necklace
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I did not find anything.

I looked everywhere at home, at work, I even went to the bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there was no news of Possible spelling mistake found.GrandamGrandamsGrandad
Granbamd
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 became the same This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 and depressed girl I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. One day I decided to wash my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 and when I took it out of the washing machine, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrandjewelrychokerpendant
necklace
 was inside. 