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A salary is more important than job.To what extand do you agree or disagree?

A salary is more important than job. To what extand lLJab

Nowadays a plethora of people consider payment is more critical than rest in today's world. However, I completely disagree with the idea these are a peripheral thing and that everyone have opportunity to production their desirable appointment during their life. There are several reasons why salary is not necessary. Firstly, all people have one chance to live and they should live with happy. Secondly, our aim is not earning a number of money instead we are earning funds to living. Thirdly, the quality is more critical than quantity. For example, If a person do not like or do not have interest to this career he or she can not trial and as well as they can not make a pay. I believe that the rest have a large role in one’s life and it is more essential than fee. For example, if someone chose his enjoyable business although less salary he will be happy. owing to the fact that this recess gives him more motivation and also involve him to be responsible to his production. As well as he has more motion to learn and discover new things dependent to his profession. Furthermore, it leads to sense of competition to be the best of his task and in that way he had a number of glee.

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people
 consider payment is more critical than rest in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
's world. However
, I completely disagree with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 these are a peripheral thing and that everyone have opportunity to production their desirable appointment during their life.

There are several reasons why salary is not necessary. Firstly
, all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have one chance to Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).live, and
live and
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live
 with happy. Secondly
, our aim is not earning Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: "much money", "a good deal of money".much moneya good deal of money
a number of money
instead
 we are earning funds to living. Thirdly
, the quality is more critical than quantity. For example
, If a person do not like or do not have interest to this career he or she can not trial and as well
 as they can not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a pay.

I believe that the rest have a large role in one’s life and it is more essential than fee. For example
, if someone chose his enjoyable business although less salary he will be happy. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOwing
owing
 to the fact that this recess gives him more motivation and also
 involve him to be responsible to his production. As well
 as he has more motion to learn and discover new things dependent to his profession. Furthermore
, it leads to sense of competition to be the best of his task and in that way he had Possible agreement error. The noun glee seems to be uncountable; consider using: "much glee", "a good deal of glee".much gleea good deal of glee
a number of glee
. 