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I’m going to talk about my laptop that I have bought recently. To facilitate online learning as well as store necessary documents, it was bought after graduating from high school. A laptop is an extremely useful electronic device. Since owning it, I have used it more than a smartphone. A laptop connected to the internet has really helped me a lot. I can use Google to find the necessary materials for studying and a lot of different things. I use the laptop to connect to the world, surf the web, and communicate with friends. In addition, I also use it for entertainment purposes, such as watching movies and listening to my favorite music. I also use my laptop to learn what I'm interested in on my own,  which is called graphic design. Because of its small size and light weight, I can easily transport it anywhere. Without it, really doing everything would be very difficult. Especially during the current pandemic, COVID- 19 is breaking out, the laptop is a device that helps me follow the teacher’s lecture. I consider myself extremely fortunate to own such a useful laptop because I know that many people cannot afford a smartphone for online learning.
I’m going to talk about my
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laptop
that I have
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recently. To facilitate online learning
as well
as store necessary documents, it was
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bought
after graduating from high school.

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laptop
is an
extremely
useful electronic device. Since owning it, I have
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used
it more than a smartphone. A
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laptop
connected to the internet has
really
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helped
me a lot. I can
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use
Google to find the necessary materials for studying and
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a lot of
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different
things. I
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use
the
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laptop
to connect to the world, surf the web, and communicate with friends.
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, I
also
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use
it for entertainment purposes, such as watching movies and listening to my favorite music. I
also
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use
my
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laptop
to learn what I'm interested in on my
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own
,
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which
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graphic design.

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Because
of its
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small
size and light weight, I can
easily
transport it anywhere. Without it,
really
 doing everything would be
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very
difficult.
Especially
during the
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current
pandemic,
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COVID
- 19 is breaking out, the
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laptop
is a device that
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helps
me follow the teacher’s lecture. I consider myself
extremely
fortunate to
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own
such a useful
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laptop
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because
I know that
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many
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people
cannot afford a smartphone for online learning.
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IELTS essay a product that you have bought recent

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
200 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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