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The innovation and latest technological advancements is a topic of great controversy these days. No doubt, the advancement of technology has made our lives lot easier but the cost we are paying is a lot more then we can think of or we see around us today. The adverse impact of technology can be seen easily on our health. Another great impact of technology over the humans would be the growing distance between each other. There are various reasons for weakening our relationships with our dear ones, with those who need us most and the root cause is technology again. However, certainly, technology has helped us to grow and achieve too much in a short span of time in the area of health, science, education, communication etc. But the adverse effects of technology overweigh the benefits if we look at it in a broad way.
The innovation and latest technological advancements is a topic of great controversy these days. No doubt, the advancement of
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has made our
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the cost we are paying is a lot more
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on our health. Another great impact of
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over the humans would be the growing distance between each other. There are various reasons for weakening our relationships with our dear ones, with those who need us most and the root cause is
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technology
again.
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us to grow and achieve too much in a short span of time in the area of health, science, education, communication etc.
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the adverse effects of
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IELTS essay what are the advantages of technology?

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145 words
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