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The country I want to visit the most is Bhutan - "the happiest country in the world". There is enough peace in the world here. From the fresh air, to the residents who support the LGBT community, how poetic the landscape is, the socio-economic development is always at a sustainable /səˈsteɪ. nə. bəl/ level, this place is also considered the Kingdom of Buddhism - honoring the heart. compassion and purity /ˈpjʊr. ə. t̬i/ of the human mind. Hopefully, in the future, I will set foot here to see Bhutan with my own eyes.
The country I want to visit the most is Bhutan
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the happiest country in the world
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peace in the world here. From the fresh air, to the residents who support the LGBT community, how poetic the landscape is, the
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IELTS essay a place you want to visit

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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