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A piece of equipment that is important in your home How you got it (or, who bought it)? What you use it for? How often you use it? And explain why you think this thing is useful?

A piece of equipment that is important in your home How you got it (or, who bought it)? What you use it for? How often you use it? And explain why you think this thing is useful? WEnwD
Equipment plays an important role in our day to day life. There are many important types of equipment n in my home which I often use such as a screwdriver, hammer, pliers, flashlight, vacuum cleaner, printer etc. But one of them is very important and that is the grinder and mixer. I purchased this grinder from Amazon during the summer sale. It is of Havel brand mixer and I bought it for just 3000 rupees. I needed it in my kitchen. It is durable and easy to operate. The varieties of features present in this device make it very easy to make food in a very simple manner. A lot of food items can be prepared in a matter of minutes. Starting from chopping to whipping it has made the life of a kitchen very easy and loveable With this device, I can make doughs, ice creams, milkshakes, soup, yoghurt and a variety of other dishes in a very short time. I use this equipment regularly to eating a healthy meal. So this is the one types of equipment that I found very useful in my Home.
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bought
it for
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just
3000 rupees.

I needed it in my kitchen.

It is durable and easy to operate.

The varieties of features present in this device
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easy to
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food in a
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simple manner.

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A lot of
food items can
be prepared
in a matter of minutes.

Starting from chopping to whipping it has made the life of a kitchen
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very
easy and loveable

With this device, I can
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doughs
, ice creams, milkshakes, soup,
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short time.

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regularly
to eating a healthy meal.

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IELTS essay A piece of equipment that is important in your home How you got it (or, who bought it)? What you use it for? How often you use it? And explain why you think this thing is useful?

Essay
  American English
13 paragraphs
187 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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