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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness, and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In 21 century, communities have been starting to treat to each other by their financial provision and opinions from another people. Ancestor's qualities became not so precious as it was in the past. I agree with this statement that people ingnore older's principles and we have different attributes to judge. Nowadays, it seems very difficult to recognize people's personalities. In that case, our social status can help in that. Usually when we want to find information about human, we start to research and ask people if they know him or her. I have noticed that our action and past experiences play a significant role in our life. For instance, two people came to the interview. One of them said that he has an incredible experience and worked on a good company. However, another person did not has any job before. So, it means that first one is better and interviewer will accept him. For getting job social status helped him. The same thing happening with famous people. Whatever if person kind or not, people will try to be liked and do everything. Because they have enough financial resources and their status is high. For example, I watched a film, where working staffs tried to do perfect conditions for them in order to get superb comments about place or do an advertisement. In conclusion, we live in the world, where people's wealth and status are essential to be valued and successful. Nevertheless, we are forgetting about main characters of people like kindness, intentions, devotion and mercy, which communities do not give so much attention.
In
21 century
, communities have been starting to treat to each other by their financial provision and opinions from another
people
. Ancestor's qualities became not
so
precious as it was in the past. I
agree
with this statement that
people
ingnore
older's
principles and
we have
different
attributes to judge.

Nowadays, it seems
very
difficult to recognize
people
's personalities.
In that case
, our social
status
can
help
in that.
Usually
when we want to find information about human, we
start
to research and ask
people
if they know him or her. I have noticed that our action and
past experiences
play a significant role in our life.
For instance
, two
people
came to the interview. One of them said that he has an incredible experience and worked on a
good
company
.
However
, another person did not
has
any job
before
.
So
, it means that
first
one is better and interviewer will accept him. For getting job social
status
helped
him.

The same thing happening with
famous
people
. Whatever if person kind or not,
people
will try to
be liked
and do everything.
Because
they have
enough
financial resources and their
status
is high.
For example
, I
watched
a film, where working staffs tried to do perfect conditions for them in order to
get
superb comments about place or do an advertisement.

In conclusion
, we
live
in the world, where
people
's wealth and
status
are essential to
be valued
and successful.
Nevertheless
, we are forgetting about main characters of
people
like kindness, intentions, devotion and mercy, which communities do not give
so
much attention.
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IELTS essay A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness, and trust, no longer seem important. with this opinion?

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