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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. v.15

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. Ans: Social status now a days become a status symbol to stand in the society. People will try to know about you if you have a material possession and good status in society. Time is laying a big role in this phenomenon. Having moral values, good cultures these are the personality traits of person which will remain with you long-life. I strongly disagree with this statement that to stand in a society or to be a popular person you should have class. No, I believe this is applicable or fit only for the celebrities not for a common Man. A common man knows amongst people for his high values, his traits. Today’s generation is smart enough to understand what is permanent and temporary. These materialistic things are temporary only but ethics, culture, moral values which you gained or earned from your Grandfathers it will remain with you thru your life, because what you learnt from your parents it’s like a non-demolish able assets. Small- Small things i. e. our values, kindness, family, trust all are very much important you know a man by his behavior only and these all assets reflects in our personality whatever we are doing. In each activity a person can judge you what kind of personality you are. Person having too much money, materialistic assets, property and luxurious life but all are waste if you don’t know how to behave and treat a Guest or any stranger. so all these things are not long lasting, they can leave you any time in between of your life so only feel proud on your personality traits which makes you popular and fascinate others to come to you and talk to you. A relevant and realistic example I would like to share – A girl after wedding comes in In-laws family, in her wedding, parents gave her so many gifts, too much money, materialistic and costly presents however they know these all are temporary and they are not lifetime but parents knows what are the beliefs, values, ethics, family culutures, love, trust they have given her it will be with her and help her to make her place in In-Laws house and heart of family members. A girl in that family will be known for her down to earth and genuine nature not for her dowry. At last in Conclusion – A person is known for his simple living high thinking not for his materialistic things which are with him for a limited time period but the assets we have and our upbringing reflects how we behave in society that’s matters a lot and in short by our behavior only we can influence other which will be permanent – “first and last impression – stays forever in heart “.
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person’s
worth nowadays seems to
be judged
according to social
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status
and material possessions.
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Old
-fashioned values, such as
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honour
, kindness and trust, no longer seem
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important
.

To what extent do you
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agree
or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
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own
knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Ans: Social
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status
Did you mean “nowadays”?
now a days
become a
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status
symbol to stand in the
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society
.
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People
will try to
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know
about you if you have a material possession and
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good
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status
in
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society
. Time is laying a
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big
role in this phenomenon. Having moral values,
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good
cultures these are the
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personality
traits of
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person
which will remain with you long-life.

I
strongly
disagree with this statement that to stand in a
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society
or to be a popular
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person
you should have
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class
. No, I believe this is applicable or fit
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only
for the celebrities not for a common
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Man
. A common
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man
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knows
amongst
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people
for his high values, his traits.
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Today
’s generation is smart
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enough
to understand what is permanent and temporary. These
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materialistic
things are temporary
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only
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but
ethics, culture, moral values which you gained or earned from your Grandfathers it will remain with you
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thru
your life,
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because
what you
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learnt
from your parents it’s like a non-demolish able assets.
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Small
-
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Small
things
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i. e.
our values, kindness,
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family
, trust all are
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very
much
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important
you
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know
a
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man
by his behavior
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only
and these all assets reflects in our
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personality
whatever we are doing. In each activity a
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person
can judge you what kind of
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personality
you are.

Person having too much money,
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materialistic
assets, property and luxurious life
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but
all are waste if you don’t
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know
how to behave and treat a Guest or any stranger.
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so
all these things are not
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long lasting
, they can
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leave
you any time in between of your life
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so
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only
feel proud on your
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personality
traits which
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makes
you popular and fascinate others to
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come
to you and talk to you.

A relevant and realistic example I would like to share
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–
A girl after wedding
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comes
in In-laws
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family
, in her wedding, parents gave her
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so
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many
gifts, too much money,
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materialistic
and costly presents
however
they
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know
these all are
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temporary and
they are not lifetime
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but
parents
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knows
what are the beliefs, values, ethics,
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family
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culutures
,
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love
, trust they have
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given
her it will be with her and
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help
her to
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make
her place in In-Laws
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house
and heart of
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family
members. A girl in that
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family
will
be known
for her down to earth and genuine nature not for her dowry.

At last
in Conclusion
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A
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
is known
for his simple living high thinking not for his
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materialistic
things which are with him for a limited time period
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the assets we have and our upbringing reflects how we behave in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
that’s matters a lot and in short by our behavior
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
only
we can influence other which will be permanent
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
“
first
and last impression
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–
stays forever in heart “.
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IELTS essay A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. with this opinion?

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