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A person who impacted your life

A person who impacted your life JYNLk

There are many people impact in my lives. They are my role model and they love me. One of them is my mother. My mother name is shipu rani dev. she was 44 years old she was a wonder women ever i see. Because of his personalities. My mother work for a national women harriesment depertment. and from here he recived a great succes. My mothers recived national word for her great work for poor, widow, raped women. and everyone love my mother. for all of reasons my mother is a great impact of me. I love my mother.

There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 impact in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. They are my role model and they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 me. One of them is my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
 name is Possible spelling mistake found.shipsshipship u
shipu
Possible spelling mistake found.ranrankrainRandrangreins
rani
 dev. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterShe
she
 was 44 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 she was a wonder women ever Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of his personalities. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
 work for a national Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "woman"?woman
women
Possible spelling mistake found.harassment
harriesment
Possible spelling mistake found.departmentdeportment
depertment
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 from here he Possible spelling mistake found.receivedrevivedrecitedrelived
recived
 a great Possible spelling mistake found.success
succes
. My mothers Possible spelling mistake found.receivedrevivedrecitedrelived
recived
 national word for her great work for poor, widow, raped women. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 everyone The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "loves", "loved".lovesloved
love
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFor
for
Consider using "all reasons" or "all of the reasons".all reasonsall of the reasons
all of reasons
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
 is a great impact of me. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmomparent
mother
. 