Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

A person who i thinks is very open

A person who i thinks is very open kY96n
I think not every person in the world is getting easily familiar to everyone. infact i am one of those persons. i find it very hard to make new friends and getting familiar to others but today i would like to talk about a person who is in my perception is very familiar and she is my mother. my mother is having a very familiar and open nature. she got familiar with new peole easily and not find it difficult to talk to them. for this nature she has o lot of friends in relatives as well as in neighbourhood. she does not hide anything inside her. infact she said the any good or bad fact in front of that person rather than to hide it in heart. on the other hand sometimes this nature of my mother does not like by few people. in conclusion my mother has a very open and familiar nature. for this nature some people like her very much but contrastly some people does not like her but i think everyone needs to having this nature so that we does not feel hesitate for sharing our views and feelings with others
I
think
not every
person
in the world is getting
easily
familiar
to everyone.
infact
i
am one of those
persons
.
i
find it
very
hard
to
make
new friends and getting
familiar
to others
but
today
i
would like to talk about a
person
who is in my perception is
very
familiar and
she is my
mother
.
my
mother
is having a
very
familiar
and open
nature
.
she
got
familiar
with new
peole
easily
and not find it difficult to talk to them.
for
this
nature
she has o lot of friends in relatives
as well
as in
neighbourhood
.
she
does
not
hide
anything inside her.
infact
she said the any
good
or
bad
fact in front of that
person
rather
than to
hide
it in heart.
on
the other hand
sometimes
this
nature
of my
mother
does
not like by few
people
.
in
conclusion my
mother
has a
very
open and
familiar
nature
.
for
this
nature
some
people
like her
very
much
but
contrastly
some
people
does
not like her
but
i
think
everyone needs to having this
nature
so
that we
does
not feel hesitate for sharing our views and feelings with
others
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay A person who i thinks is very open

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
195 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts