Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

high salary vs job satisfaction

high salary vs job satisfaction LrKGG
A lot of people prioritize high salary over the job satisfaction. This could lead to significant problems in ones life because higher salaries cannot provide a heathier life. There are hosts of reasons, why some people want high pay. Firstly, peple wants to live a epiqurean lifestyle, having money help to pursue this kind of life. In addition a person will be able to popular in high society because of the grip on the money.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
A lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
prioritize high salary over the job satisfaction. This could lead to significant problems in
Did you mean "one's"?
ones
life
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
higher salaries cannot provide a
Possible spelling mistake found.
heathier
life.

There are hosts of reasons, why
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
want high pay.
Firstly
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
peple
wants to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
Possible spelling mistake found.
epiqurean
lifestyle, having money
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to pursue this kind of life. In
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
addition
a person will be able to popular in high society
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the grip on the money.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay high salary vs job satisfaction

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
75 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts